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Golden Cranefly by =PyroSikTh:iconPyroSikTh:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Visual Poetry

©2008-2009 =PyroSikTh
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I needed a new visual poem to put up. So I wrote one about seeing beauty of life.

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~xoBearxo Sep 23, 2008, 6:47:32 AM
I like this one, and how its laid out. Nice job!

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~xoBearxo Sep 23, 2008, 6:52:53 AM
:hug:

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"Class dismissed. Homework for this evening is experiment the bodies intake of poisonous cleansing products, a golden star for the ones sent to the ER."
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*ladyglass Sep 23, 2008, 7:31:19 AM
Awesome shot and nice poetry ;)

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~AconiteHikaru Sep 23, 2008, 9:20:14 AM
Hmm nice ^^ Your poems are always that deep, no? This one's pretty peaceful, makes you relax

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~evcfenix Sep 23, 2008, 10:08:48 PM
the plastic bag dancing in the wind part seems a bit cliched for me considering i've watched "American Beauty" a million times.
but this piece didnt fail me. every line took my breath away and the ending was just great. i could feel the steady build up to the ending. and i totally agree with wat you say in this piece. very well done.
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=NineWhileNine Sep 24, 2008, 1:05:20 AM
Simple feelings in simple words :) I do relate to the things you have conveyed here...
I love the picture you chose, too. :clap:

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=PyroSikTh Sep 24, 2008, 3:21:04 AM
It's still there, hanging.
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=PyroSikTh Sep 24, 2008, 3:22:35 AM
Well that was kind of the point of that line. I had just finished watching American Beauty for the first time and it inspired me to write a poem about it. With that in mind, I need to reference it somewhere. I'm glad someone noticed.
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